“I shot her in the eye” Duffy says this so carelessly within the poem to highlight just how carelessly the soldiers shot the innocent child in the eye.
Shooting Star – Carol Ann Duffy The poem ‘Shooting Stars’ by Carol Ann Duffy tells a shocking story of a female prisoner held by Nazis in a concentration camp around the time of the Holocaust.
The poem is set in 1940, Hitler and his Nazi party had taken control of most of Europe and had vowed to exterminate the entire Jewish race.
Furthermore nothing anyone does will erase what has happened to the innocent Jews, which impacts on how the world will almost be forever tainted as sometimes being a bad place.
After the brutality that has already occurred Duffy continues to bring in more imagery whilst describing the persona getting raped.
In addition Duffy has also not used any punctuation whilst listing them possibly to highlight the fact the list goes on and on due to the mass killing of the Jewish race and the ignorance and lack of care from the Germans.
“Mourn for the daughters, upright as statues, brave.Which links with the next line how no matter what is happening to the persona she still holds on to her religion which is inspirational.Which shows true faith due to the situation in which she is in, she hasn’t given up.Although Duffy narrows into the rape at first with a subtle manor by saying “One saw I was alive. ” The enjambment between ‘loosened’ and ‘belt’ draws the attention to the horrific fact that this woman is actually about to be raped.Duffy goes about it in a very subtle way, but the graphic description we get next is enough to make anyone feel the sheer impact of what has just occurred.” Not only men were dying, but women and children too.It forces the readers to question themselves, and put themselves in the personas place and question whether we would be as brave. This tells us that these people were strong before they died they were not quavering and falling about they kept their dignity.The horror of what is happening to the poor innocent Jew continues as Duffy says “My bowels opened in a ragged gape of fear” I believe this is one of the lines in the poem which has most impact toward the reader.The long vowel sounds and the graphic imagery of the event is etched into your mind.In addition the repetition of ‘Remember’ echoes in our head like a guilty conscience, the last dying word of a fellow human being at the hands of incompetent young men.The way in which Duffy says “which will for ever make the world bad” Indicates that no matter what, this brutal behaviour and these actions have already occurred.